2024届高考英语一轮复习写作增分技巧讲解课件：3 教你如何扩展句子
写作进阶提升之三 ——怎样扩展句子
写作进阶提升 简单句的5个基本句型 5 主语+系动词+表语
S+Link.V+P
1. 主语+谓语
S +V.
2. 主语+谓语+宾语
S+Vt+O 3.主语+谓语+间宾+直宾
(S+Vt+Oi+Od)
4.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补
(S+Vt+O+O.C) Mary was a girl.
She smiled. Tom liked her. He gave her a picture. She put the picture
on the wall.
1. Mary was a (n) _________
girl.（形容词）
2. She smiled _______
. (副词）
3. Tom liked her _______
. （ 副词）
4. He gave her a picture _______________
______
（定语从句）
5. She put the picture on the wall _______
_____________________
（状语从句）
beautiful
happily
secretly
that he had drawn
for her .
so that
she could see it conveniently . 方法一
添加修饰成分：形容词、副词、不定式 短语、分词短语、介词短语、定语从句、状语从 句等。
Mary was a beautiful and ①
girl .
Tom and ②
liked her very much.
They soon became good friends. On Mary’s birthday, Tom gave her a picture and
③
She smiled happily ,
④
them and put the picture on
the wall.
clever
Jack
a bunch of roses.
accepted 方法二
添加并列成分：
Jack was rich. He had his own company.
He
made
a
fortune.
He bought
Mary
a diamond ring. Neither Jack nor Tom knew what Mary thought. During that night before Mary’s birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary to marry him .
During
the same night ,Tom couldn’t get to sleep until he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his memory.
方法三
构成并列句：用并列连词
and, so, but,
while, for（因为）等。
Jack was rich, ①
he had his own company
②
made a fortune, ③
he bought Mary
a diamond ring, ④
neither Jack nor Tom knew
what Mary thought. During that night before Mary’s
birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary
to marry him ⑤
Tom couldn’t get to sleep until
he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his
memory.
for and so
but while After her birthday party, Mary couldn’t help looking at the picture now and then
because
in her eyes looking at herself in the picture
was like looking at a superstar on the screen. To see is to believe. The picture proved
that
Tom had a talent for painting and
her
choosing him as her boy friend
was a wise decision. 方法四
使用V-ing短语、不定式短语或名词性从句等做主语、宾语或表语等。
that
___ ______________________
______ _______________________
Summary 扩展句子的方法 方法一：添加修饰成分 方法二：添加并列成分 方法三：构成并列句 方法四：使用V-ing短语、不定
式短语或名词性从句
作主语、宾语或表语等 It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly
but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact
that liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”
Step 1. Finish reading the following paragraph
in one minute to get the main idea.
It was obvious ①
Jack was unhappy.
②
made him angry was ③
the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. ④
he told Mary that not only he was more handsome ⑤
Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly ⑥
firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact ⑦
liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. ⑧
，we remain good friends as before. ”
that What that When than but that However Step 2. Fill in the missing words according to
the context.
Step 3. Read aloud the following paragraph ,
ready to repeat it.
It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly
but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact
that liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”
It was obvious that ___________. What _____ was that the diamond ring _______________ was refused by her.
When he told Mary
that not only
___________ than Tom，_______ he had a car, a
flat ______. Mary said ______ but _______, “You
should know the fact that liking you does not mean
_________. To have money is not ___________.
However, we remain good friends as before..”
Repeat Who will win the game? Step 4
Homework:
Do exercises 1 and 2 in
your paper.
写作进阶提升之三 ——怎样扩展句子
写作进阶提升 简单句的5个基本句型 5 主语+系动词+表语
S+Link.V+P
1. 主语+谓语
S +V.
2. 主语+谓语+宾语
S+Vt+O 3.主语+谓语+间宾+直宾
(S+Vt+Oi+Od)
4.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补
(S+Vt+O+O.C) Mary was a girl.
She smiled. Tom liked her. He gave her a picture. She put the picture
on the wall.
1. Mary was a (n) _________
girl.（形容词）
2. She smiled _______
. (副词）
3. Tom liked her _______
. （ 副词）
4. He gave her a picture _______________
______
（定语从句）
5. She put the picture on the wall _______
_____________________
（状语从句）
beautiful
happily
secretly
that he had drawn
for her .
so that
she could see it conveniently . 方法一
添加修饰成分：形容词、副词、不定式 短语、分词短语、介词短语、定语从句、状语从 句等。
Mary was a beautiful and ①
girl .
Tom and ②
liked her very much.
They soon became good friends. On Mary’s birthday, Tom gave her a picture and
③
She smiled happily ,
④
them and put the picture on
the wall.
clever
Jack
a bunch of roses.
accepted 方法二
添加并列成分：
Jack was rich. He had his own company.
He
made
a
fortune.
He bought
Mary
a diamond ring. Neither Jack nor Tom knew what Mary thought. During that night before Mary’s birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary to marry him .
During
the same night ,Tom couldn’t get to sleep until he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his memory.
方法三
构成并列句：用并列连词
and, so, but,
while, for（因为）等。
Jack was rich, ①
he had his own company
②
made a fortune, ③
he bought Mary
a diamond ring, ④
neither Jack nor Tom knew
what Mary thought. During that night before Mary’s
birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary
to marry him ⑤
Tom couldn’t get to sleep until
he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his
memory.
for and so
but while After her birthday party, Mary couldn’t help looking at the picture now and then
because
in her eyes looking at herself in the picture
was like looking at a superstar on the screen. To see is to believe. The picture proved
that
Tom had a talent for painting and
her
choosing him as her boy friend
was a wise decision. 方法四
使用V-ing短语、不定式短语或名词性从句等做主语、宾语或表语等。
that
___ ______________________
______ _______________________
Summary 扩展句子的方法 方法一：添加修饰成分 方法二：添加并列成分 方法三：构成并列句 方法四：使用V-ing短语、不定
式短语或名词性从句
作主语、宾语或表语等 It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly
but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact
that liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”
Step 1. Finish reading the following paragraph
in one minute to get the main idea.
It was obvious ①
Jack was unhappy.
②
made him angry was ③
the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. ④
he told Mary that not only he was more handsome ⑤
Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly ⑥
firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact ⑦
liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. ⑧
，we remain good friends as before. ”
that What that When than but that However Step 2. Fill in the missing words according to
the context.
Step 3. Read aloud the following paragraph ,
ready to repeat it.
It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring
he
had
bought
for
Mary’s
birthday was
refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly
but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact
that liking you does not mean loving you. To have
money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”
It was obvious that ___________. What _____ was that the diamond ring _______________ was refused by her.
When he told Mary
that not only
___________ than Tom，_______ he had a car, a
flat ______. Mary said ______ but _______, “You
should know the fact that liking you does not mean
_________. To have money is not ___________.
However, we remain good friends as before..”
Repeat Who will win the game? Step 4
Homework:
Do exercises 1 and 2 in
your paper.
