【南方新课堂】2024高考英语二轮复习专题训练：专题5短文改错（含答案）
专题五 短文改错训练1
Armining classmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all.It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship，hoped to lighten my parents' financial burden.After making tons of painstaking effort，I succeeded.At the ceremony，my mum was the most poorly－dressed woman答案： happy because I am doing what I like.As a senior three student，I study hard every day and live it
the full.It feels good to study hard with my
classmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things
happened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped
all.It was a time when my family
going through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship， to lighten my parents' financial burden.After making tons of painstaking ，I succeeded.At the ceremony，my mum was the most poorly－dressed woman with the brightest smile on her face.
B
On September 29，the students in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum.At 8：00：30minutes later，we were divided into five groups but began our separate visit.Some students took notes carefully as if they visited.All the students were amazing at the rapid achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by after we knew it.At 11：30答案： visit to China Science and Technology Museum.At 8：00 for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30 to us briefly and told us
we should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later，we were divided into five groups
began our separate .Some students took notes carefully as they visited.All the students were
at the rapid achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by
we knew it.At 11：30 interest in science and technology.
C
This morning，I was jogging in the park when I caught the sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the contents.Inside it，I found some money or a card with a phone number.Believe that the owner would be worried，I immediately tried the number.A man answered it in an amazing voice.Hearing that I had his wallet，he sighs with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes late，the man arrived.After confirming he was an owner，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up，he expressed his gratitude to me repeated.Seeing the smile on her face，I felt happy that I was able to help.
答案：hen I caught sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked
up and checked the contents.Inside it，I found some money
a card with a phone number. that the owner would be worried，I immediately tried the number.A man answered it in an
voice.Hearing that I had his wallet，he
with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes ，the man arrived.After confirming he was
owner，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up，he expressed his gratitude to me .Seeing the smile on
face，I felt happy that I was able to help.
D
When it comes to the TV，there will be different word in different people's minds.Some people think that watch TV is a good way to relax.Firstly，we can broaden our horizons or know more about the world by watching latest news and reports.Secondly，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally，we can predict that may happen in the future and be prepared.
Therefore，every coin has its two sides.There is also disadvantages of watching TV.Not only do it do harm to our eyesight，but it also has a bad affect on our studies and everyday life.Definitely，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat to it in a right way.
答案： in different people's minds.Some people think that
TV is a good way to relax.Firstly，we can broaden our horizons
know more about the world by watching
latest news and reports.Secondly，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally，we can predict
may happen in the future and be prepared.
，every coin has its two sides.There
also disadvantages of watching TV.Not only
it do harm to our eyesight，but it also has a bad
on our studies and everyday life.Definitely，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat it in a right way.
训练2
AMy name is Li Hua.I was born in Qingdao，Shandong Province on February 1995.I started the school in 2001 when I was six.I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best but I am very good at it.Last year I winned first prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp.My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter.
答案：ingdao，Shandong Province
February 1995.I started school in 2001 when I was six.I studied
in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and
last summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best
I am very good at .Last year I
first prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening
popular music and collecting .My favourite sports
swimming in summer and skating in winter.
B
One day，I was walking home after school when an old man fell heavy onto the snow－covering road.Many people passed by；others worried that if they helped himown my coat to keep the old man warm.In no time did the ambulance came.Having helped the doctors carry him into an ambulance，I felt relieved.In my opinion，this is our duty to help those who are in troubles.
答案： school when an old man fell
onto the
road.Many people passed by， no one took action.Some of them said it was none of their business；others worried that if they helped him into a difficult situation.Seeing what had happened，I called 120 immediately.While waiting
the ambulance，I took
my coat to keep the old man warm.In no time the ambulance came.Having helped the doctors carry him into
ambulance，I felt relieved.In my opinion， is our duty to help those who are in .
C
I'm going to study in the senior middle school on September.I can live either at school and at home.But I can't decide because both has advantages and disadvantages.At home，I have my own room，but I can have a good sleep.However，I have to share one room with 5－6 student at school.Maybe I can't sleep good.It's a problem.Although I can have better food at homereat fun and I can make more friends.If I live at home，I'll have ride to school.It's a waste of time and not safely.It's so hard to make a decision.
答案： September.I can live either at school
at home.But I can't decide because both
advantages and disadvantages.At home，I have my own room， I can have a good sleep.However，I have to share one room with 5－6
at school.Maybe I can't sleep .It's a problem.Although I can have better food at home with my classmates.I think it's great fun and I can make more friends.If I live at home，I'll have
ride to school.It's a waste of time and not .It's so hard to make a decision.
D
Beijing has lots of famous tourist attractions.Every year many tourist come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.But several years ago，visitors behave badly.Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers，cutting down trees and hurt animals.And even better，some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.
Luckily，things has changed.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly at animals.Everybody smokes in the woods.All these changes make us happily.As student，I think we should know it's our duty to protect the environment.Let's to change our behaviour when we travel.
答案： come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.But several years ago，visitors
badly.Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers， down trees and hurt animals.And even ，some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.
Luckily，things
changed.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly
animals. smokes in the woods.All these changes make us .As
student，I think we should know it's our duty to protect the environment.Let's change our behaviour when we travel.
训练3A
Dear Friend，
As you got up this morning，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me，asked my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your life yesterday.But I noticed you were too busily.I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew it would be a few minutes for you to stop and say a hello，but you were too busy.At one point you have to wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except sitting in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your foot.I thought you wanted to talk to me and you ran to the phone and calling a friend.
Love always.
Your Friend，
Jesus
答案：end，
As you got up this morning，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me， my opinion or thanking me
something good that happened in your life yesterday.But I noticed you were too .I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew
would be a few minutes for you to stop and say
hello，but you were too busy.At one point you
to wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except
in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your .I thought you wanted to talk to me
you ran to the phone and
a friend.
Love always.
Your Friend，
Jesus
B
Recently，I got package notice from the post office.I was not expecting a package.I thought，“Oh no，it's probably a package from some companies that I will not want.But I will have to go to the trouble of send it back.” Late that day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting anything in the mail from him.Well，my attitude on the package waiting for me at the post office change immediately.Because I now knew who had been sent it！I went to the post office as soon as I could.I was delightful to get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend.答案： package notice from the post office.I was not expecting a package.I thought，“Oh no，it's probably a package from some
that I will not want. I will have to go to the trouble of
it back.”
that day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting
in the mail from him.Well，my attitude
the package waiting for me at the post office
immediately.Because I now knew who had sent it！I went to the post office as soon as I could.I was
to get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend.C
It was an unusual cold day.Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour.So a cold front had brought winter's cold back.I sit with two friends by the window of restaurant just off the corner of the town square.The food were especially good that day.As we talked，my attention was drawn outside，across the street.There，walking into town，was a man which appeared to be carrying all his goods on his back.She was carrying a well－worn sign答案： cold day.Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour. a cold front had brought winter's cold back.I
with two friends by the window of
restaurant just off the corner of the town square.The food
especially good that day.As we talked，my attention was drawn outside，across the street.There，walking into town，was a man
appeared to be carrying all his goods on his back. was carrying a well－worn sign “I will work for food.” My heart sank.We continued with our ，but his
image lasted in my mind.
D
When I was seven years old and my sister were only four，our father was killed in an automobile accident just two week after his twenty－seventh birthday.Mum was disappointing.Although we were really so young to understand what was going onHis boss was a nice young man named Charles which got to know my mother and fell in love with her later.
答案： only four，our father was killed in an automobile accident just two
after his twenty－seventh birthday.Mum was .Although we were really
young to understand what was going onould never be quite the same.We had a nice home，plenty of
we needed，but we
our father.About every evening we would go to our grandparent's house for
visit.My grandmother had begun working part time at Kentucky Fried Chicken. boss was a nice young man named Charles
got to know my mother and fell in love with her later.
训练4A
Dear John，
I heard you were injured in a accident and stay in hospital now.I feel so sorry for you.The classmates and me plan to see you next week.Don't hesitate to turning to us if there is everything we can do for you.In addition，don't worry at your school work.We will help you make it up when you return back to school.During recovery in hospital，try to keep a good mood，which help improve your health.What's more，eat more fruits or drink more water than usually.Always follow the doctors' advices.It's
very
important. Looking
forward
to
your coming back.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案： accident and stay in hospital now.I feel so sorry for you.The classmates and
plan to see you next week.Don't hesitate to
to us if there is
we can do for you.In addition，don't worry
your school work.We will help you make it up when you return to school.During recovery in hospital，try to keep a good mood，which
improve your health.What's more，eat more fruits
drink more water than .Always follow the doctors' .It's
very
important. Looking
forward
to
your coming back.
Yours，
Li Hua
B
In our life，everyone is surely to have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I am about my English learning three years ago.I found it difficult to following my teacher in the
English
class.Beside，my
classmates
often laughed at me because my poor English.So I was determined to do something about it.Firstly，I took a part in the English Corner that I met many friends.They willing shared their methods of learning English with me.I also found it useful to keep English diaries.What's more，you talked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English.As a result，I made great progresses in learning English.
答案： to have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I
