2024届高考英语书面表达练讲指导评析（第二部分）专题三：图表式专题练评1
2024届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分专题练评）（专题三 图表式1）
下面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因，请根据你对图表和漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容：
1.描述野生动物种类的变化趋势；
2.分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因；
3.谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。
注意：
1.可参照图表中文字及下面文章开头所给的提示，作必要的发挥想象。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Many animals are in danger of dying out.
描述野生动物种类的变化趋势柱形图柱形的高度，由此事物发展趋势野生动物种类。柱形图野生动物种类野生动物种类野生动物种类he kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years.
2.平均每年大约减少了30,000
①There are about 30,000 kinds of animals disappearing on average each year.
②About 30,000 kinds of animals have decreased on average each year.
③About 30,000 kinds of animals have reduced on average each year.
3.2010年只剩下1.5百万
①Until 2010, only 1.5 million kinds of animals was left.
②There were only 1.5 million kinds of animals remaining until 2010.
③There were only 1.5 million kinds of animals left till 2010.
描述图表信息(加上适当的过渡句和合并有关句子)
As is clearly shown in the bar chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years. With about 30,000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year, as a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2010.
二、分析原因
化要点为句子（注意多重表达）
1.①Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur to seek fashion.
②Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur for fashion.
③In order to show off, many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur.
2.①Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them for a big profit.
②Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them to earn large amount of money.
③Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit.
讲述原因，连句成篇(加上适当的过渡句和以及调整表达的顺序)
三、发表自己的看法
围绕原因来自拟自己的看法
1.是我们人类采取措施来保护野生动物的时候了
2.给动物一个良好的生存环境
3.政府应该制定法律来禁止滥杀动物
4.人类与动物要和谐相处
化要点为句子（注意多重表达）
wild animals.
②The government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing.
4.人类与动物要和谐相处
①Human beings and animals should get along well with each other.
②Human beings should live in harmony with wild animals.
发表看法，连句成篇(加上适当的过渡句)
参考答案
Many animals are in danger of dying out. As is clearly shown in the bar chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past decades. With about 30,000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year, as a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2010.
There are several reasons accounting for this problem. Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters, illegal killing is an important reason. Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit, which can be seen vividly from the right picture. This has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of animals.
In my opinion, it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them. A national public campaign should be launched to give animals a good living environment. In addition, the government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing. Only in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.
2024届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分专题练评）（专题三 图表式1）
下面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因，请根据你对图表和漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容：
1.描述野生动物种类的变化趋势；
2.分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因；
3.谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。
注意：
1.可参照图表中文字及下面文章开头所给的提示，作必要的发挥想象。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Many animals are in danger of dying out.
描述野生动物种类的变化趋势柱形图柱形的高度，由此事物发展趋势野生动物种类。柱形图野生动物种类野生动物种类野生动物种类he kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years.
2.平均每年大约减少了30,000
①There are about 30,000 kinds of animals disappearing on average each year.
②About 30,000 kinds of animals have decreased on average each year.
③About 30,000 kinds of animals have reduced on average each year.
3.2010年只剩下1.5百万
①Until 2010, only 1.5 million kinds of animals was left.
②There were only 1.5 million kinds of animals remaining until 2010.
③There were only 1.5 million kinds of animals left till 2010.
描述图表信息(加上适当的过渡句和合并有关句子)
As is clearly shown in the bar chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years. With about 30,000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year, as a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2010.
二、分析原因
化要点为句子（注意多重表达）
1.①Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur to seek fashion.
②Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur for fashion.
③In order to show off, many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur.
2.①Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them for a big profit.
②Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them to earn large amount of money.
③Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit.
讲述原因，连句成篇(加上适当的过渡句和以及调整表达的顺序)
三、发表自己的看法
围绕原因来自拟自己的看法
1.是我们人类采取措施来保护野生动物的时候了
2.给动物一个良好的生存环境
3.政府应该制定法律来禁止滥杀动物
4.人类与动物要和谐相处
化要点为句子（注意多重表达）
wild animals.
②The government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing.
4.人类与动物要和谐相处
①Human beings and animals should get along well with each other.
②Human beings should live in harmony with wild animals.
发表看法，连句成篇(加上适当的过渡句)
参考答案
Many animals are in danger of dying out. As is clearly shown in the bar chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past decades. With about 30,000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year, as a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2010.
There are several reasons accounting for this problem. Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters, illegal killing is an important reason. Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit, which can be seen vividly from the right picture. This has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of animals.
In my opinion, it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them. A national public campaign should be launched to give animals a good living environment. In addition, the government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing. Only in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.
