湖南省长沙县实验中学2024届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题20 校园学习话题指导（教师版）

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　　实例指导1—毕业晚会

　　【写作任务】

　　经过高中三年的学习和相处，毕业在即。不论是同学之间还是师生之间都建立了深厚的友谊。按照学校以往的惯例，毕业之前要举行毕业晚会。现在班主任向大家征集晚会的方案，现在请你以The farewell party 为题，写一下你心中的毕业晚会。词数120-150。

　　内容要点：1. 参加者

　　2. 对晚会的设计

　　2）构句：

　　在表达不同的要点时，应注意句式多变，活用语法，避免单一化。比如，擅用各类复合句、非谓语动词、倒装句、介词结构等来恰当衔接各个简单句，才能体现较高的英语构句水平。比如：

　　1）As far as I am concerned, we students should play a leading role to make the party unforgettable. 使用了特殊句式As far as I am concerned。

　　The farewell party

　　As far as I am concerned, we students should play a leading role to make the party unforgettable. Because of the lifelong friendship, teachers will be

　　invited as well as our parents who support us so strongly.

　　As you know, how to plan the party is the most important question. At first, our headteacher will make a moving speech for the opening. Then, there will follow the prepared performance, such as songs, dances, cross talks and so on. Besides, party games will be included and teachers, parents and students will take part in them. At last, the party will come to an end by taking photos freely. Last, but not least, delicious food and drink can’t be left out. As you can see, the farewell party means so much that we will spare no effort to do it well. After all, it should be the highlight of our high school life.

　　实例指导2—校园帮派类

　　【写作任务】

　　为预防和控制青少年违法犯罪，我国于1999年颁布了、《中华人民共和国预防未成年人犯罪法》，对此问题予以了相当程度的重视。但是由于各种原因，青少年违法犯罪现象仍然大量存在，而且往往与校园帮派有着千丝万缕的联系；那么我们该如何看待校园帮派现象呢?针对此问题，请你用英语写一篇词数为120-150的英语短文投给《学英语》报社发表自己的看法：

　　参考词汇：

　　帮派：gang

　　恐吓、威逼：bully

　　How to View Gangs in Schools?

　　It must be pointed out that gangs made up of several boys or girls, the number of which sometimes even reaches up to several hundred, can be widely seen among middle school students. Not only does a gang have bad effects on students, but also it affects the normal teaching order at school.

　　Most of the gang members are students who are, aggressive and prefer to smoke, drink and play computer games rather than study. Some are willing to join in the gang in order to strengthen the power of their own circles; others just want to get protection from "The Elder Brother"of the gang and still some are forced to do so. Experts suggest that these students be guided correctly in order to avoid them doing harm to society.

　　I think that teenagers should put their time and energy mainly into study. Avoiding joining m any gang means avoiding committing crimes later on

　　【教师点评】

　　这是一篇以议论为主的书面表达，全文共分三段。第一段作为引子提出“校园帮派”存在的现象，

　　用非常肯定的句型：It mustbe pointed out that gangs ．．．can be widely seen among middle school students，；第二段分析“帮派”成员特点和他们加入“帮派”的不同原因，并用一句话. Experts suggest that these students be guided correctly in order to avoid them doing harm to society.得处“帮派”现象的存在是危险的这一结论；第三段对“帮派”是否应该存在这一现象发表自己的看法。

　　整篇文章符合高分书面表达的特性：

　　1、段落完整，层次分明

　　2、语法正确，用词恰当

　　3、表达个人观点。具有一定的思想性

　　句型的使用符合以下几个原则：

　　1、倒装句原则

　　2、定语从句原则

　　3、并列复合句原则

　　4、虚拟语气句原则

　　5；高级词语原则(动名词作主语和宾语)

　　【佳句欣赏】

　　1） Not only does a gang have bad effects on students, but also it affects the normal teaching order at school. （倒装句）

　　2) Most of the gang members are students who are, aggressive and prefer to smoke, drink and play computer games rather than study. (定语从句)

　　3）Experts suggest that these students be guided correctly in order to avoid them doing harm to society. （suggest 引导的虚拟语气的宾语从句）

　　4） Some are willing to join in the gang in order to strengthen the power of their own circles; others just want to get protection from "The Elder Brother"of the gang and still some are forced to do so. （并列复合句）

　　5） Avoiding joining m any gang means avoiding committing crimes later on （动名词短语作主语和宾语）

　　实例指导3－早恋现象

　　【写作任务】

　　如今中学生早恋现象在校园黑出现的越来越多。有的人认为应该制止；有的人认为没有必要干涉，只要不影响正常学习即可。作为中学生，你如何正确看待这个问题?请你写一篇120--150词的英语短文来陈述你的观点或看法。

　　参考词汇：早恋puppy love

　　3．在写作时要住意使用衔接成分使上下文过渡自然，

　　【学生习作】

　　Puppy love is more and more common among middle school ,students nowadays. Concerning this, different people have different opinions.

　　I hold the view that puppy love is unsuitable for us student's because puppy love can lead to many problems. Firstly, it not only influences our spirit but also distracts us from our studies. Then, it also makes our parents and teachers much too worried about us. What's more, puppy love is a

　　waste of time. We are too young to be involved in it.

　　From my point of view, we should concentrate on ourstudies because we are at a stage of gaining knowledge and growth. At this stage, learning more important th,m being involved in love affairs for us middle school students. It is urgent that we should pay more attention to our studies, and only by doing so can we have a brighter future.

　　【教师点评】

　　1. 本篇习作基本完成了写作任务，并且文章结构合理。第一段直接点题，提出中半生早

　　恋现象越来越多，第二段分三部分叙述了早恋带来的问题。第三部分阐述自己的观点：中学生应该把更多的精力放在学习上。

　　2. 从本篇习作看。作者的语言表达能力功底深厚，例如：文章使用了一些高级词汇，增加

　　了文章的亮点，使文章增色不少．例如：介词concerning，动词短语引distract…from…,

　　实例指导4―中学生是否可以穿时尚的服装

　　写作任务:

　　假如你是某中学的学生,最近在你们班的英语班会上就"中学生是否可以穿时尚的服装？"的问题展开了讨论。请你根据下表的讨论结果,给你校校报"英文写作"栏目投稿,客观地介绍讨论的情况。(词数:不少于120)

　　意见

　　60％的同学认为不可以穿时髦的衣服

　　40％的同学认为应该穿时髦的衣服

　　原因 1. 价格昂贵，而学生没有经济收入；(1). 好看，时尚；(2). 追求时尚会牵扯精力，影响学习；

　　2. 作为当代的年轻人不应该太保守，应适应时代的发展；

　　3. 学生应该穿着朴素，时髦的服饰不符合中学生身份。

　　4. “爱美之心人皆有之”，追求美是中学生的权力。

　　初稿:

　　One day we had a discussion about whether students should wear fashionable clothes. 60% of the students are against the idea. They said, "Fashionable clothes are too expensive and we haven’t made money yet. We teenagers should put our hearts into study. Going after the fashion will waste our time and it will have a bad effect on our study. We should be dressed in a simple way, and fashionable clothes don’t fit in with the environment at school." 40% of the students said, "We can wear fashionable clothes, because they are good-looking and popular. As a young student in China, one should follow the fashion of the modern life." They also think that they have right to enjoy their beauty.教师点评: 本篇作文条理清晰,明确表达了两种观点及其原因。但也有不足之处:

　　1. 作者只是将写作任务中的表格提示做了字面上翻译,语言略显生硬。

　　1. 作者将要点整合,准确地表达了复杂的逻辑关系,条理清晰,使文章浑然一体。2. 在文章中使用了一些恰到好处的复杂句式,句型富于变化,主动被动交替使用,例如:60% of the students, who are against wearing fashionable clothes, said ... / We are expected to dress simply ... 表现出作者很好的语言功底。

　　实例指导5----Ought to read too many fantasy stories for teenagers?

　　【写作任务】

　　随着科技和社会的发展，人们的想象力越来越丰富，随之而来的便是越来越多的科幻小说问世。科幻小说以其紧张、新奇、刺激的情节极大地吸引着人们的眼球，尤其是青少年和在校的中小学生，有的同学看科幻小说着了迷，甚至耽误了学习，荒废了学业。不过，有的同学也不以为然。请以Ought to read too many fantasy stories for teenagers?为题，写一篇120词左右的文章发表你的看法。注意行文连贯流畅，内容充实完整

　　看法理由

　　不要多看，影响学业 1. 花费太多时间与精力，不利于集中精力学习；

　　2. 会依赖空想而不去追求现实生活；

　　3. 有些科幻小说写得太粗俗，影响身心健康。

　　应该多看，丰富想象力科幻能引导科学的发展方向；

　　开阔孩子的视野，发展孩子的想象力和创造力；

　　能够根据现在的情形有效地推断出未来可能发生的情况。

　　你的观点自由发挥

　　参考词汇：1. vulgar 粗俗；2. creativity 创造力

　　1. nowadays

　　2. as a result

　　3. put out

　　4. considering

　　5. aim

　　6. in one’s opinion

　　7. too many

　　8. absorb

　　9. as a consequence

　　10. lead to

　　11. mental health

　　12. scores of

　　13. base on

　　14. broaden

　　15. in terms of

　　16. as for

　　17. as well

　　18. personally

　　19. focus on

　　【组词成句】

　　根据构思和文章大意使用上述词汇和正确的句型将各要点表达出来，注意谓语动词的适当变化形式，以增加语言的表达力；还可以使用不同的句型结构特别是高级句型，如简单句、并列句、复合句（宾语从句、非限制性定于从句）等；另外，也可以使用一些比较复杂的语法现象，如介词短语（做后置定语、方式状语）、不定式（做宾语）、动名词（做主语、宾语）等，使文章更加出彩。

　　1. People develop their imagination quickly.

　　2. More and more fantasy stories have been put out.

　　3. Teenagers can’t read too many fantasy stories as they like.

　　4. Reading fantasy stories takes many students a great deal of time and energy.

　　5. Some teenagers are too ridiculous that they are completely absorbed in fantasy stories.

　　6. Scores of students think it right for teenagers to read fantasy stories.

　　7. They think that such stories are based on science fiction.

　　8. Reading them increases our knowledge and broadens our mind

　　9. It also gives us some new ways to look at old situations and makes us look at the world in terms of centuries, not just six months or five years.

　　10. Important as study is, it is not the only thing we can do.

　　【参考范文】

　　Ought to read too many fantasy stories for teenagers?

　　Nowadays, with the development of the technology and society, people develop their imagination quickly. As a result, more and more fantasy stories have been put out. Is it right for the middle school students to read as many fantasy stories as possible?

　　Considering the main aim for a student, some students don’t think so. In their opinion, teenagers can’t read too many fantasy stories as they like. It's reported that reading fantasy stories takes many students a great deal of time and energy. What’s more, some teenagers are too ridiculous that they are completely absorbed in fantasy stories, as a consequence they ignore their studies. Even worse, some fantasy stories are too vulgar, which can be harmful for the teenagers’ mental health.

　　However, scores of students think it right for teenagers to read more fantasy stories. They think that such stories are based on the science fiction, which can lead the direction of science. Reading them still increases their knowledge and broadens their mind. It also gives them some new ways to look at old situations and makes them look at the world in terms of centuries, not just six months or five years.

　　Personally, although it is a good way for teenagers to develop our imagination and creativity, as middle school students, we must first focus on studies and put more effort into our schoolwork.

　　【佳句背诵】

　　1. As middle school students, learning more knowledge is our first aim.

　　2. To read many fantasy stories will surely have much influence on their studies.

　　3. It’s said that the some young girls are absorbed in fantasy stories, thus they ignore their studies.

　　4. As middle school students, they should concentrate on their studies at present.

　　5. Reading fantasy stories can enrich our knowledge and broaden our mind.

　　6. Although it is a good way for teenagers to develop their imagination and creativity, as middle school students, they must first focus on studies and put more effort into their schoolwork.

　　实例指导6—选择高考志愿

　　[真题展示]

　　下表是你根据平时了解所得到的中国高三学生选择高考志愿的信息。请你根据该表用英语写一篇150词左右的简要介绍，向编辑部反映该情况。

　　约35%的同学认为：约45%的同学认为：约20%的同学认为：

　　1.应以个人兴趣为主。

　　2.兴趣是成功之母。

　　3.被迫学自己不感兴趣的专业是痛苦的。 1.应以社会需要为主。

　　2.将来容易找到工作。

　　3.兴趣可以培养和改变。 1.如何选择，是一难题。

　　2.听从父母或老师的意见。

　　第二步

　　围绕主题，提炼要点，编拟提纲